Score: 7
"Needs a bit of work, but enjoyable"
date: March 11, 2008
Okay.
The beginning was alright I suppose. It seemed to be going somewhere until 0:28. Then it put it off to start something entirely new. This was kind of confusing, to be honest, it didn't turn out that well.
The stuff at 1:00 doesn't really seem like a song anymore...
I like 2:00. It's very relaxing and calm. 3:20ish was a good cut off, but it was only needed there.
So far while listening, this song seems to be a few different songs in one. Maybe consider concentrating on different parts of this track and developing it more?
5:00 it goes back into the same stuff in the beginning (1:00). Needs less chords and a little more in between them. 6:22 it starts to get drawn out a little too much.
At 7:00 and onward i was expecting a different kind of conclusion, but i didn't really like it.
I went a little overboard with this review, i know, but overall I really enjoyed listening to this track.
7/10
4/5