First Thing~

Hey, I'm not saying anything bad about this beat at all! I actually have something in mind that would be a perfect partner for it.

I'm in the process of working on a side scrolling adventure game and you might say the overworld is similar to Super Mario World and the way you select levels and move to different areas and such. This sound is perfect for an area I had in mind of making about half way through the world.

I would like to use this and once I have finished my game, I would like to talk with you about maybe working on a submission with me. I just know that with your music, the atmosphere of the game overall would be amazing! PM me about what you think, K?

In the meantime, keep up the great work.

It's ok

Like you said the beat can't really stand on it's own. But it's still a good song.
I'm not exactly sure of what reverb is, but it's an effect I think and with it you can at least add echo to a sound. Or you can make a sound thicker or metallic. That kinda stuff.
I can send you a link to a reverb effect vst. PM me if you need the link

Can Do Better

This is a good song but you can do better, not trying to say something bad.

But it sounds too empty not enough going on. Just a couple beats going on. But I still like you style.
4/5

Nice Its oK

when they mean by choppy is that it sounds a little bit lo quality....though it has some nice parts to it....good job man....the reverb could use some work though...
lol and i have every single sound that you used....

This is :)

This is pretty good keep it up.