Nice melody

So you have a nice melody here it really comes together and has a nice progression style that builds into some nice flavor so a pat on the back for a nice piece indeed some background mixture could be added for that extra touch but overall this was pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added mix of sounds would be a nice idea

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Nice.........

A lot of distortion in the song, but the Wipe Me Down beat is one of my favorites, so I have to give you props on remaking it.

sorry 4 the bad review but i call em how i see em

distortion is a big problem hear. needs to be fixed. try using a EQ. lol. and transitions were there but they went to the same thing, there was no diversity to the song at all. over all its a good idea, just try over.

Great!

A nice and smooth hiphop tune! Sounds perfect. Great beat, great melody. Now all this needs is a little vocal work and it'll be 1337. Keep it going. :P

-cd-

has a bit of distortion

sry but man try to remake this song
NOT THAT IT SUCKS
but its alright just your transitions aren't that good