Score: 10
"You still have it."
date: March 10, 2008
That spark of originality and talent to work excruciatingly on this brand new song.
I love the piano and bass combo along with the fast paced tempo. I have to hand it to you, ya know how to create brilliant tracks.
The intro was especially masterful, how you re-edited it from the original preview, giving it that pumped up look.
Forgive me for forgetting the correct term, but the ending seemed slightly odd.
It starts slowing down which takes away that pumped feeling.
Metaphorically, it's like a car, starting slow from the start, then the turbo kicks in, carrying it on wings of steel over the grinding asphalt until it breaks into an unremarkable speed, giving you a racing heart and determination. Then suddenly, it starts to slow down, ever so slow, like it is giving up.
other than that, it's perfect and ironically, the track I've been craving ever since I arrived here at newgrounds.com.
No joke, The first track ever to get me inspired into piano was my Victory *Fixed* by Bleek989. I've always been a huge fan of bass, so this combined is just about flawless.
Most likely your #1 fan, next to Fuzy, lol.
~Supra Addict
March 10, 2008
Author's Response:
I believe you are correct about the ending, and i sort of, you know, wanted to try something else. Fair enough, the attempt went slightly bad, and you learn from your mistakes. It was a very good review, thank you.
- DKL
PS: You guys gotta work the fan thing out, haha =)