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Mar 4, 2008 | 8:56 PM EST
File Info
Loop
1.6 MB
1 min 45 sec
Score
3.63 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.63 / 5 stars
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609 Plays | 81 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

I put some time into this one but you have to listen to the whole thing to hear the ending and how it changes.. or you can just skip[ ahead... at 00:53 thats where it changes, the beat drop and well just listen to it .. what evers clever

Reviews


Music-storyMusic-story

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Okay I'll rev. this one

Hmm, interesting song. It's different from the usual type of techno on NG. Here are my comments.

Good:
1) I like that instrument (not sure if two instruments are playing) right at the beginning of the song. Very happy sounding. Plays a fun beat too.
2) 1:35 I like the crystallized piano. Only last for a brief moment. Why? That was the best part.

Not sure:
1) 13 seconds in and this very quiet piano comes in. Make it louder maybe? I can hardly hear it. The piano beat is also a bit off key when it plays with that happy techno instrument.
2) So I think you need a background sound because the song feels empty. Maybe add a heaven like instrument with lots of sustain. You could implement that nice piano at 1:35 more into the song too.

A short song so not much to talk about thus a short review from me. I think you should expand on this song. Put some more reverb on your instruments and include a background instrument....now you got a much better song. Also longer song with new instruments later introduced. That's all I got to say. 5/5 vote and 9/10 review.
Bye for now


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cartoon781 responds:

Thanks ALOT for all the compliments and pointers on how to make it better. But I cant find my melody file so i cant fix it. I looked everywhere. Im going to try and make it over but first Im going to keep looking for it. As soon as i get it done ill let you know.


shizeetshizeet

Rated 3 / 5 stars

It's an alright start...

There's some nice ideas, especially the groovy part around 1:15 where you have that one instrument start to echo or something against the chords. The synth chords are a bit too loud, and it's kind of hard to hear the other instrument. The mix sounds a bit barren though with just the two instruments you have, both of which occupy about the same range (lower treble). I'd think about adding some more instruments, at least a bass line so we can get some of the lower register filled. The build-up part near the end felt kind of unnecessary since it's winding to close but the increase in volume made it sound like it was actually going somewhere else. Maybe change up the chords some too once since they pretty much don't change from start to finish.

Anyways, right now it sounds rather mediocre, but if you continue to work on this it might turn into something nice.



mariomusicmaker1mariomusicmaker1

Rated 3 / 5 stars

neat,

This is neat, you should have however used somthing a little less harsh in the beginning. it would go much better with the tiny blips in the background, also you should use a course or soft filter on the 3rd synth to come in, but i lite the idea,

6/10 5/5



m0dul4rm0dul4r

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I'm impressed

You did that entire track in piano roll? Kudos to you.


cartoon781 responds:

thanks