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"I look behind my back
Tryin' to hide the fact that
I don't know where I'm going
Don't know what I'm doing
Going too slow
To keep up with the world
And with time
While I stand here it's all passin' me by."

This is a pretty recent project. I started this exactly a week ago--got most of it done by the weekend. From there on I just messed with it, and voila! A piece.

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Average Score: 8.7 / 10

Score: 7

"Repeditive"

by: Blasphemare

date: July 8, 2008

Yeah its repeditive, but i guess every one allready mentioned that, so i guess ill comment something else:

I dont think it would spoil the song if you added the words you wrote, but then again, its tough to get voice actors, and a singer *whew* that must be tougher than eating a shroom through your armpits... uuh...

So my advice: got a mic? sing!... ore... well... i wouldent... but you know...

July 9, 2008

Author's Response:

I have a mic. It's lousy. And I have full lyrics.

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Score: 9

"Ireviewable review"

by: Hades

date: June 27, 2008

Cool stuff, good melody, but I think that it was a bit repetitive after some time. Nice twist at 1:35, really made a significant change to the feel of the song. The ending was great, with the wind-bell like sounds.

The melody reminded me of some video game song, but I just can't put my finger on which one it was. It felt to me as though it could be a background in a movie scene where the main character is having some serious doubts over something.

Great stuff!

July 23, 2008

Author's Response:

I didn't exactly have a melody in mind, actually. I just put stuff together. But a video game song? I have no clue.. o.o
I get the character thing, though. Thanks again! :D

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Score: 10

"Hooray for Oxymorons!"

by: Celestial-Sticker

date: June 16, 2008

It was repeditive, but it was good repitition. Great melody and great synth/ambient instruments!

June 16, 2008

Author's Response:

Thanks again!

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Score: 8

"I'd call it a foot-tapper."

by: Kaneda-X

date: May 18, 2008

I couldnt help but tap my foot and bob my head as I listened. It has a bubbly feel to it, and it seems very upbeat. I like the way it sort of climaxs and then slowly settles down, although I believe it climaxed a bit too early(lol). The main critique goes along with the other two reviewers. It is quite obviously a repetitive piece, however it's repetitiveness isnt REALLY bad, its just there.

May 19, 2008

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks again. I believed the climax was fine for its length--though I admit I wasn't really thinking when to stick it in, I just did :)

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Score: 9

"Personal Favorite"

by: pathock3

date: March 28, 2008

Your best work! Of course I am biased because I like this style more than the other songs you wrote, but even so, it's good. Obviously repetitive, but thats alright. Critique? Let it grow. Start with less and end with more. All your music stays at the same level. Let it change over time. It peaks at 1:41 and that's my favorite part, but It doesn't do anything more. Keep going, keep growing until it gets out of control, then let it come back down. Finally, at the very end you have the piano end on the minor 6th. Nooo!!! Sorry, I just didn't really like that. Do something else with the piano lol.

~Patrick~

March 30, 2008