Score: 10
"Best track so far :D"
date: March 1, 2008
This is your best song so far in my opinion
I like the hats, they sound very professional. The slides you put in sound very good, and add a lot to the song. You don't seem to have any clipping problems anymore which is very good, well done on that. Sometimes it takes me a good 2 hours or more just to solve clipping problems. I'm glad you got rid of that shitty clap sample :P The tune is bloody awesome, I might steal :P I also have noticed you stopped using the "deep" sound effect, which is good, the tempo change sounds awesome as well, your percussive skills on this song are great. The flute sound awesome as well, i just noticed that on the second play through :P
On the other hand though, the piano sounds to much like fruity loops, if you brought up the higher frequencies and brought down the mid, and put a nice warm reverb on it it sound a lot better. The opening sound effect should be played as long as it does in the song, and gets a little bit annoying, in my opinion. The snare drum you used, should have a big reverb, high bass, low mid, and highish frequencies. I can't really hear much of a bass line either, but that could because I just woke up :P. A filter on the master channel to stop high piercing frequencies should be used as well, cause sometimes you don't hear them at low volumes, but play high, you almost blow your brains out :P
Not much else to say I think, only minor tweaks are needed in this song, well done on your best track I have heard so far :D
Your friend,
Anima :D
March 1, 2008
Author's Response:
Hmmm, thanks for the suggestions, I'll try those out. But to be honest, I don't have a flute sound in the song= ) The only thing i can think of that sounds like a flute is the higher strings part. And I didn't really have a bassline, it wasn't really appropriate(in my mind) for the "old" style of the song. I'll try and see if I can add one though, but...
The tempo change was a suggestion made by my great friend Matt Mullins. He has some music here on Newgrounds under Spazbunny. You should check him out, review him some. Especially our collab, Obscurity. Thanks once again!