question i ask myself before i holla atta chick.
eh?
Your delivery is weak. The beat tended to drown out your lyrics occasionally. And that stereo delay on the vocals was more annoying than helpful. To your credit however, the beat wasn't bad, just a little too much going on for a song like this. A better mic wouldn't hurt either.
Define a strong delivery to me in a note and i'll try and edit mine... but
yea man i get that alot i dunno what u mean bout stereo delay unless you mean the phone line effect?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Deathzone 
