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I really like the start, good job =]

Does anyone read the review titles?

The drum's a little too fast and annoying, try slowing it down and giving it unique rhythm, possibly changing it every so often throughout the song. The sound also seems to drop out for short moments. Could also be a bit longer.

Also try using a better midi set, the guitar that you used is painful to listen to.

Incidentally, you've got 2 parts of the song played by the lead guitar, the guitar part and the backing chords which are usually played by strings. If you must use a guitar for it, try using a repeating electric bass.

Lastly, it would add a bit of uniqueness and make it sound better if you used instrumental ornaments - there were several points where a trill would have been ample, for instance.

otherwise, good try ^_^