Score: 3

"Sorry..."

by: FatKidWitAJetPak

date: March 15, 2008

But this wasn't that great. I see where you were going, but the sounds were off tune. You should use different synths, and make a much longer song out of this instead of a short loop.

Score: 4

"Hmmm...not really fleshed out."

by: kevs91

date: March 6, 2008

I like the sound of this, and I really like the strings in the background, but the main synth (the least subtle one) really gets annoying after repeated listens, which is worse because of how short the loop is. If you'd rework that, and try to expand on this and add stuff, I think you could have a very interesting soundscape thing going.

It's actually pretty weird how short and basic it is because it seems like if you wanted to make a song purely about the expression of yourself you'd have to have a really fleshed out space where you could really say something. So I guess I was a bit thrown off by the title.

Anyways, I do like most of the sound here (especially the background strings), but you really need to rework some parts and try to expand on it, I think.

If you have the time, I'd also really appreciate it if you checked out/reviewed my most recent submission. Thanks.

Score: 6

"A strange short wavie song"

by: cristianedu

date: March 6, 2008

It's a bit strange, short, electronical, and nothing special, sorry, i have nothing else to say. v_v
P.S. But kinda good, if you would add it in something

{Review request club}

Score: 2

"Owie..."

by: DJ-Dax

date: February 18, 2008

I Think You Need to Turn Up the Background Beat, and Turn Down The Annoying Streams, Then it Should Work Out Good