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My first song in FL, and an extremely simple piece it is... Thats mainly because i have no clue how to use any of the special effects and stuff on FL...so just a basic beat with some presets.
Any contructive critisicm will be greatly appreaciated. In fact PLEASE provide some good feedback as i would like to know what i could do to make my music better.
(btw, if anyone bothers to download, the filename is different from the title so yeah)

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Average Score: 9.0 / 10

Score: 4

"ugh this is bad"

by: Red-Slash

date: March 4, 2008

wow this has gotta be the worst example of acid trance i have ever heard.

Sorry but i just cant find anything to complement to this song.

This is just the worst use of the 303 i have ever seen. There is nothing subtle about this song. The 303 is the easiest instrument to make trippy melodies on and you still failed to make anything really original or interesting.

I'm not trying to be mean but this song has 4.5 It just doesnt deserve it. I woudl give it 3 at most.

March 4, 2008

Author's Response:

Hey it was my first song. Like stated it IS an extremely simple piece, ill take that. But no need to be so harsh, i dont know how much you can really expect from this being my first song. To be honest i have no clue why this song had a 4.5 rating either. but uh.. thanks for the review i guess.

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Score: 10

"Yeahh ,^^"

by: DJ-Martcore

date: February 28, 2008

nice.. nice... keep it up and sum nice dancing:D
jeh nice song Much nicer then my first song xD
Bye^^

Gr. DJ Martcor

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Score: 10

"First Song? Jesus Christ"

by: Nereo

date: February 28, 2008

For a first thats pretty kick-ass man. I love it, definitely a beat I'd love to hear up in the clubs down here. Party beat to the max, it gets me wanting to break out and dance, for sure deserves max. I say you can probably improve a bit by using a few other synths, maybe a remix of an original song. But for trance this is great, i love the style.

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Score: 10

"I LUV IT"

by: Monster13

date: February 18, 2008

PARTY TIME! 5/5 10/10 KEEP IT UP!!!

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Score: 10

":D!!!"

by: Dj-Rippa

date: February 18, 2008

Great work for first song!!!
There is much potential!
keep at it and you will understand how to use it better and better.
Took me forever it feels like just to be able to throw a song together:P
Keep it up!
10 and 5! great first attempt :D!!!

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