the wolf whom we witnessed kill a fox by slitting his throat was still walking

*rising string*

she knew the sun would rise soon because she could see it over the horizon ...the last time she saw sunlight was five years ago before she was separated from her mother

*string patch*

"...five years in darkness ...five years of pain ...will all pay off for this ...my first look at the sun since I was little" she said a stared at the rising sun

*low drum*

the sun's light spread across the land swiftly and soon reached her black and silver fur ...the warmth of the sun was refreshing too her ...she squinted too look at the bright star then closed her eyes

*shaker and clave*

she remembered the good days ...she was only a pup then and was very adventuress ...her mother and father always kept her within fifteen feet of the den so she only played with her little brother whom was a reddish-brown just like she was

*flute ...piccolo ...thing*

one day her mother was asleep and her father was getting food ...so she went out of the fifteen foot range of the den and fell down a hill side though thanks too the soft grass she didn't get hurt then she saw a cage and her curiosity got the best of her ...so she went inside and the cage door slammed shut

*kick and rim tap*

"mama ...mama!!" she cried then the cage was lifted up too a humans face she backed up from his face while shaking ...the human said something but she couldn't understand what he said then the cage was placed in a shipping truck and was gassed she fell asleep

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"I really wish I hadn't made that one mistake" she said too her self and looked back at the sun

*end event*

so what do you think

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