Score: 7

"It aint that bad..."

by: rob7480

date: November 11, 2008

It aint that bad. Keep makin tunes little man. Umbrella fo life...

Score: 6

"you ruined my favorite instrumental"

by: nataSNoose

date: September 13, 2008

why you ruin it?
this sounds like you chopped it with auto chop and altered the tempo and velocity than reversed the chopped pieces.
if you make this song by scratch rather than stealing it you would be able to edit and alter the loops with no problem or glich.

Get a synth that sounds like like a high pitched bell,add about 40% feed to it and some good reverb.
use live drums from hell samples or some snares and drums that sound really hard and intense.
use some ambient string that sounds like an ominous moan or very dark with some bass over it as well.
if you dont have a electric guitar to record,you could find some nice riffs in free sound websites or you could use slayer/slayer 2 in Fruity Loops.
i liked how it sounded when it got reversed so i give it a 6 for inspiring me a new idea.

Also don't call it your song if you didn't make it lol.
be original not a pretender.

Score: 10

"Like the guy below me..."

by: WaffleMonster

date: August 10, 2008

said it is a little choppy but it is still good nonetheless!

Score: 1

"I liked the old one Better?"

by: ThePro0413

date: July 31, 2008

in my opinion it was weird, u kinda messed it up, It Is a Bit Choppy,
I thing its best if u leave it untouched , As somthings are ment to be

And Try using a Different ring to it, I feel as though the sound's a bit too rough

It needs to sound like an orchestra, not Speed Metal

Score: 3

"meh...."

by: Chocobarclock

date: June 25, 2008

ok, but seriously learn how to spell.