Ummm...

the melody got too repeatitive too fast. I would have liked it more if you just took the melody and expanded upon it then you could have repeated it as many times as you wanted and it would get repeatative slower. You should also have some sort of lay out that harmonizes with your ears like maybe INTRO-MELODY-MELODY+counter-VERSE1-Me lody+counter-VErse2-Melody-End

sweet yo

good for an rpg game dungeon or sumtin