Author's Response:
Yes, your right. It is pretty gamy. The ending does drag on for quite a while, but the effect i was trying to create for the whole peice is intact.
I have really improved from this peice, i now have a clearer understanding of the effects i try to emmit from my music. I am working, hard.
Thank you for your review. I am very pleased you rate my work an 8.
Thank you again. :)