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People here just don't have their ears trained to actually listen to music. They're mostly kids or young adults who never strayed too far beyond top 40 radio. You've got some intricate stuff going on there. Very good music. This could easily fit in one of Mike Paradinas's better albums. The melody evolves slowly and smoothly and sound design is top notch. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for your music and store it right beside my collection of Aphex Twin records.