Score: 10
"Simply amazing."
date: February 1, 2008
This is a VERY beautiful piece. The thing about this song that makes it stand out from the rest of your songs and 90% percent of the songs on NG is its quality.
FX:
1. Reveerb = 10/10 (vvvveeerrryyyy nice)
2. Reverse crash = 8/10 (Could use a higher pitch with Fruity EQ 2)
Sounds:
1. Piano = 10/10
2. Pads/strings = 10/10
3. Bass = 10/10
4. Beat = 10/10
5. Overall sound = 10/10
Set up:
1. Intro (0:00-0:25) = 10/10 (Very nice piano quality)
2. Tranistion tune (0:25-0:39) = 9/10 (The piano has seemed to lose its reveerb...But i LOVE how the strings come in.)
3. Chorus = 10/10 (Very deep. It captures a very calm feeling)
4. Flow = 10/10 (Theres no adrupt stops and it flows very calmly)
5. Overall set up = 9.8/10
Tune/Melody:
1. Feeling = This song creates a very calm nice feel to it. You have seemed to have done this perfectly so i can't offer any advice on how to improve it! - 10/10
2. Velocity of notes = To make this song seem more proffesional you can try changing the volume of each note making some louder and some quieter then others. - 9/10
3. Bassline = I love this bassline. You found the perfect notes for this song. Only thing i can think of is to add a second bassline that would occansially play in the song. - 10/10
4. Overall = Extremely genius = 10/10
Things to improve:
1. Kick = You can deepen your kick and edit it very easily with the effect "Fruity EQ". I found the kick in this song was deep yet it didn't lead the song. Try editing it so it doesn't sound like a far off sound in the song but more like a whole background to it.
2. Reverse crash = Try adding a delay bank or editing with "Fruity EQ 2" to make it sound better. Also you can add a pitch automation to make it rise or lower in pitch as it plays! A phaser can also help.
This is a very nice song and i can safely say that you improved by 100x. Insane work man!
10/10
5/5
(Whatever you do don't stop making music)
February 1, 2008
Author's Response:
Thank you for your very* long review.
When I mastered the song, I cut out a lot of higher-end sounds, just so it wouldn't pierce anyone's ears. But, I'll do thta, and re-submit it. Maybe I'll make it more dance than quiet and calming...