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Uploaded
Jan 29, 2008 | 4:46 PM EST
File Info
Song
4.3 MB
4 min 45 sec
Score
3.62 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.62 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,681 Plays | 110 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Indie
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Author Comments

This is a quick song i wrote about that one girl that you think you can't attract. I'm sure most of us have felt this sometime or another.

[Verse 1]
I rest my hands beneath my head,
Under a golden sunset beaming orange and red,
A flowing a scarlet red.

My feet they dangle off the pier,
The summer boredom making itself seem so clear,
'Cause you're nowhere near.

[Lead 1]
I feel my fingers slowly stroking the sand,
Imagining they were the strands
Of your soft silky hair...

[Bridge 1]
But it's ridiculous,
I mean what are the chances that I'd lie down here with you.
If you'd appear, if only you'd appear...

[Chorus 1]
My eyes sealed fast, I'm lost at last
These dreams are skewed beyond an
Awareness of real life, under these burgundy skies

[Verse 2]
Treading paths across the beach,
I sulk under the shadow of this palm tree,
Along with a gentle breeze.

I take the kemp necklace of mine,
Adorned with shells covered with a breathtaking shine,
This necklace a made in mind, of you

[Lead 2]
I look over the clear blue sea, and I find
My eyes out of focus
And my thoughts on your flawless face

[Bridge 2]
But it's meaningless,
I mean what are the chances that I'd ever caress that face,.
If you'd appear, if only you'd appear...

[Chorus 1] x2
My eyes sealed fast, I'm lost at last
These dreams are skewed beyond an
Awareness of real life, under these burgundy skies

[Chorus 2] x2
I'm falling fast, too much to relax
I'm drowning under the ocean built of
My unrealistic dreams, these unrealistic dreams

[Tag] x2
If you'd appear, if you'd appear
If only you'd appear...

Reviews


igxigx

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

hands together for you

i gotta compliment you on your guitar playing first, it was great. haha. at the same time, i gotta agree with others that your voice isnt THE voice for singing, but i dont really mind it much as for the lyrics. you're a very talented person, keep up the awesome work



SoundgasmSoundgasm

Rated 5 / 5 stars

5/5

Once again, ignore Fknox. He doesn't make any music. You have a good voice.



FknoxFknox

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great!

There was one thing that I didn't appreciate... your voice isn't really angelic... It's more of a normal human... yeah... The song was great, the lyrics good but the interpretation makes me lol... No offense, but you should make voice-less only songs from now on! 4/5 sorry!