Score: 9
"awesome job"
date: August 7, 2004
if this is an improv, its really really good. im blown away by the fast changing chord progression. now, i just think it sounds waaay too neat to b completely improvised, and im now sayin its bad if its not, and i believe u it is.. but you must have played this before at some point, like, a completely out of rhythm, melodically messed up version: save that one. i wrote the most amazing song and it sounded messed up and i just rewrote it in rhythm and it never reached the same level of "whoa". ur song is awesome, but if you did make something before this, i just suggest you save it cuz u can get hundreds and hundreds of ideas out of it. if u happen to go check my audio, the song ode alla vittoria iii is not the original thing.. its actually around 1/4 of the entire original song, just better organized. so if there is an original, remember to go back to it.. its worth it. in terms of playin, nothing really lol ur song is awsome, i love the mix between the roots and the chords, awsome progressions, id add a solo-ish thing to the right hand tho, otherwise amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot!
You are right about that thing
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sounds waaay too neat to b completely improvised
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because I played the chords over and over but everytime a bit different.
The first time I played that kind of tune was 3 years ago.
That song was only the first of 3 song I recorded. I can't send the other 2 to NG because they are too big (10 min).
I'll submit another shorter Improvisation and there you will hear similar chords and parts. BUT it will be still very very different^^.
Thanks for the great review!
ps.: I'll add a solo part with the right hand ;-)