its a cool beat

dude ur too loud
ur covering up a good beat
also, spend a little more time on ur lyrics

4 for effort

whats this man no flow

=/ Stressing out man, lol

i see a pattern in all your songs, Cock and balls... dude get layed or some thing guy or girl, at lest then you wont make shit like this The spit was shity

*cough*

my name is Lenjin
and i got some thing to say
I cut my self more then an EMO
Day by day

my raps all suck and i dont give a Fuck
beef with me and your the next to get Bucked

I sound like a Retard in all my songs
I got no pleace were i belongs

Wow you know what, my Freestyle is just as shitty as your stuff

Socker there! OMG im white too, use that in a Hate song. i know you going to cook one up. the sad shit is man "your a nobody" and you beefen with nobody.
and if you made a slander song you know what i would not be impressed.
just one more song so some one can lay your ass to rest. and mic conrtol i know your mad and every thing but mic control is a key for a Rapper

You sound stressed out

All I can say is stick to "comedy-rap", because when you try to rap serious.. it's comes out wack. Keep my name out yo mouth, and maybe ..I'll start determining who's the better one in this battle.

EXTRA!! EXTRA!! THE AMAZING WORLD OF WARCRAFT BATTLE!!!

Internet White Blood vs Internet British Blood.

Who will win?? lmfao

-RMP

Just tell him he sounds like Little Nicky...

This one is better his track, but not by a lot. You also sound pretty angry, I'm sure you feel betrayed because your own Blood Brother talked behind ya back. If you want the proof, just go to my news post, and you'll see my screen shot ^.^

Also... what happened to your quality? It was pretty good, just needed mastering. Now it sounds like before. Straight up garbage. Farewell NG! =D