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Jan 22, 2008 | 3:16 PM EST
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2.9 MB
3 min 10 sec
4.23 / 5.00

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Rated 4.23 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

My first attempt at writing a song. Ever. I don't even play the piano, barely any music theory, so it's hard to do anything beyond the basics. It's electronic, but uses guitar for melody. Whaddya think? =P

Reviews much appreciated.

Edit: Despite a certain reviewers comments, I do NOT use any loops whatsoever in this song. NONE. ZERO. ZIP.



Rated 5 / 5 stars


ware be da saxophone??

RadioactiveRhino responds:

Sadly, da saxophoneaphone not be da here.
It be in da other song.
Also, Lobster is against kosher laws....yet I'm speaking to one. Wierd...


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Pretty good

I'm not gonna say I know too much about electronic music as I'm a live kind of guy but I have a few comments. I liked the drum beat. The rhythm was pretty good. It was a little bit weird when the drum fell out because the beat changed in a kind of weird relationship. I wish you would have done more on the electronic stuff and less on the guitar. Good job though.

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RadioactiveRhino responds:

Wow...a ten...NEVER did I think I'd get this!
Thanks a bunch for the review. Near the end of 'writing' this song, I decided it needed melody. I liked the sound of the guitar. You are right though, I shouldn't have added it. Something else would have fit much better.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


it's a cute little piece, it's a very good beginning piece. the fact that you used no loops is impressive. Exponentially better than my first piece, which will never be heard by anyone other than me, as I deleted it from the face of the earth.

You've got potential. Best of luck in future endeavors, mate. :P

But you should take theory, it's very helpful. I had no idea how much it would improve my music until I took it.

RadioactiveRhino responds:

Thanks, MJTTOMB!
You have noo idea how hard it is to compose without piano :P
And I am taking theory at the moment, so I hope it does.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


It was good, but next time, just put a LITTLE bit more downtime in between synths, OK?

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RadioactiveRhino responds:

Woah, a 9! Thanks!
And ya, needed much more 'downtime.' But, as I admit, really isn't the greatest. Or goodest.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not to bad!

A pretty good song for your first song right? its got some good melody and really does flow with itself. My only complaint would be its a little random and doesn't flow as well as it should. Other then that its a pretty nice track. Keep it up!


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RadioactiveRhino responds:

Thanks for the review, Wyldfyre!
As for the randomness, i just got tired of writing a lic over and over that didn't fit, so i just said "I'll play something. No matter what I get, it'll go." It wasn't a very good get :P