Here another one that I worked suprisingly hard on. I made it in time to submit to the AP. I like it, but its sketchy. But due to the absence of my cousin, I can say "good enough".
Enjoy!
It was ok, except...
It was fairly simple, which isn't bad. But the one thing that really threw it off was the brass in the background. Brass is a tricky thing to work with, and is easily overused, or, in this case, is off note-wise (tuning, pitch, etc.). I liked the simple piano and percussion, though. They worked well together. But, again, the brass sticks out like a sore thumb and ruins the overall motion of the song.
Ah, okay.
I admit this isn't one of my best and I kinda rushed it.
awesome
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Oh, thanks.
It's good, not great.
The beginning seems rather off, and the whole thing seems slightly off-pitch.
Other that it's good.
Thanks. I'm not guru of Mario music so its not my high point. I'm still glad you liked it.
Reproducal
Apart from the distortion,this sounds fine, but apart from the different samples, this is basically a reproducal of the original. I might give it a shot and try adding some DnB ;)
Share alike. Go ahead.
ok.
your piano is over modulated you may want to compress that some. The Drums are a lil to basic id on't know its not a bad remake but i've heard better. Other then that yes somethings off. Keep working on it though i'm sure you'll master this!
Wyldfyre1
Thanks, your comments have been noted.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
knuxrouge 
