Score: 5
"It was ok, except..."
date: July 9, 2008
It was fairly simple, which isn't bad. But the one thing that really threw it off was the brass in the background. Brass is a tricky thing to work with, and is easily overused, or, in this case, is off note-wise (tuning, pitch, etc.). I liked the simple piano and percussion, though. They worked well together. But, again, the brass sticks out like a sore thumb and ruins the overall motion of the song.
September 3, 2008
Author's Response:
Ah, okay.
I admit this isn't one of my best and I kinda rushed it.
