Good variety
So this one has some good variety, almost seems like the sound was muffled at first and not sure if that was the intent of things but you did present some very nice work here and a good style of deep sound and some quality sound even, anyways nice work, keep it up.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
onlything I would do would be is make this longer ad more to it, stretch it out so its not as short, but more depth would be nice.
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