Hmm
I really hated the original of this song, to be honest. And then I saw that you reworked it and got excited, and seriously, this song could be a really amazing song if you wanted to put a little more effort into it. I like certain PARTS of this song, particularily the melody and the bass line. But I mean really, SBB is right, it gets boring too fast and is too repetitive. I'm sure you've read that to death in the reviews for this song, so I kinda tried not to say it.
Really, though, you should try to breathe some life into it. It starts out alright, and by the first minute you're already bored. I mean the melody is good, and if you want mindless background noise then it's awesome. The part in the middle where it kinda drops off and is just the piano is unecessary and irrelevant. Furthermore, it disrupts the entire flow of the song.
I really love the melody though, and I really wish you would breathe new life into this song, because it could be a masterpiece. <3