ok so, the slower melody at the beginning after the strings is a bit drab, and the song as a whole is fairly simplistic and repetitive. otherwise, it was pretty darn good (or at least as far as i think so). i plunked it out on a keyboard, liked it, and thought i'd make a song involving the tune (it's the melody). it still could be better, but for an hour or 2 of work, im fairly satisfied.