Score: 7
"Seems well written."
date: May 21, 2008
The song is well written. Is that as deep as the voice gets? Thats some pretty "grown up" music. The one voice with the chorus seems out of place with the music.
The verse at 3:12 was a bit out of sync. The flow was off.
I liked that you weren't all about the "glock". Seems a real story of suburban lazy fucktwats. Like, most rappers, fly the "gun toten ghetto tough boy, rough life, bla bla bla." But the minute they are pointed at for "supporting violence", they claim that they are nothing but "entertainers". Posers. Arnold Schwartzenegger is NOT the Terminator. He is Arnold. He knows the difference.
What I'm saying is, it's nice to see you aren't "posin the glock", as we call it.
So decent writing.
I'll review more some other day. Hip Hop gives me a headache.