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Jan 13, 2008 | 10:41 PM EST
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816.7 KB
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3.79 / 5.00

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Rated 3.79 / 5 stars
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Well. not much to say took me about 3 hours to put together. I really like it. Crits are very welcome. Very new to this song stuff but I think I am finally getting the hang of it. Comments will be responded to.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


this is a simple piece, but I can hear improvement :).
This melody is really simple but still! First thing would be to add some background sounds.. let's say, strings? just playing the accords that are used. then there could be some variations in the melody, which shouldn't take too long to do :D.
a bit more hi-hats and it will be juicy. How about it?

These are just suggestions. :) peace

irush responds:

Yea those are all very good suggestions, however I dont have the file anymore because I am using a demo version of FL :(


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

a lot better

This is sounding much better. What I noticed early on when I listened to it the first time was that the bass should have been a bit more moving throughout the piece, along with the sudden cut-offs with it. If you meant to do that, and you want it that way, a cymbal crash would be great when you do that.

Another thing-I've done this myself-make sure when you record it that you make sure that at the end of it isn't looping back the beginning of the song. Try to hit record just right, I guess.

Anyways, you are improving.

irush responds:

Thanks for the review mate. The tip you gave me about using the line cell or none helped me a bunch.