Score: 10

"awesome"

by: Juguito

date: June 20, 2008

it clearly fits the target for it was composed
i really liked
and its quality too!
my orchestral pieces are difficult to seem real

Score: 8

"Very Nice"

by: jeanniewood

date: June 15, 2008

I'm seeing... two young warriors in the forest, going at each other with swords. Nothing serious, but with the threat of, well, losing your macho status. :)

At any rate, I did very much like it. A tad short for my taste, but with the conceptual idea behind it that made more sense then trying to create an epic.

Do you think you'd be interested in creating a 'real battle' version of this eventually? The same theme, same general music, but a bit more booming and omanis. (sp?)

Score: 10

"aWeSoMe"

by: F-777

date: March 26, 2008

This would work greatly with an RPG. Amazing stuff!!! You really have talent =D.

10/10
5/5

Awesome.

Score: 8

"Nice"

by: Prince-Marth85

date: February 21, 2008

Well done. It certainly does have the feel of music you would here when you're learning how to fight.

Score: 6

"Lots of advice for this one."

by: Krayon

date: January 17, 2008

This is a very good job for what you were trying to achieve but...
You need loud booming drums for a battle, they really add atmosphere.
You need more strings and backing.
Build the strings up more and add more brass at the 21 - 25 part.
The end needs to be a drum not a piano.
The possibility of good quality vocals would help it to no end.
Good luck. =)