this is excatly
what is wrong with metal these days. Vocals that dont go with the song and end i up ruining it. The instruments playing the same cords and beats again and again. No original stuff here no change in the song no feeling in it either. I would say go back rethink how this song should go. listen to the different metal out there and take notes. A metal song should make you feel like kicking ass not give you a headache.