sounds horrible O.O

I'm not shure whether it's because it's without drums (make everything sound better) or because of the shitty sound quality
man this just sounds too random, sometimes there seem to be no orientation, like a jam session, there are many timing problems, the second guitar often goes far away from the rhythm guitar, although there is some potential it's just horrible, sorry (how long do you play guitar yet?) I give you 2 stars for the potential in it, I would give 3 but sometimes the song creeped me out (not in a positive way)