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This is basically my first song. Don't expect anything too great.
It was made using FL studio 7 with basically all that I have learned to use with it. It still sounds a bit plain, but my friends seem to like it.
Opinions for a beginner please!

And anything I could improve?

EDIT: Someone said it sounded like the basshunter tutorial song! Which is true, I started like that, but then went off in my own direction. I looked it at again... and ugh... they were more similar than I had thought when I uploaded this... oh well, sorry if it hurt anyone.