these guys are trying to assimilate you

love the sound

Oh No!

Dude!! Whyyy!!??? This had some serious potential, man! A fast kickass drum loop and a dirty synth would have MADE this alone! If only you'd givin it more work! Please remix this or somethin, 'cause this is a diamond in the rough. I can't believe you just let something with this much potential go out like that.... That hurts my feelins, man. lol

a little more specific...

I felt it wasn't good either, but heres why

1. NO drum track, when this track is clearly calling for one, begging even,
2. Sound FX at the end killed what wasn't there basically
3. Bass is so dull, uninteresting, regardless of it being a violence lounge thing, just nothing to like on the bass
4. The effects though were nice, if used right could make a good song.
5,Extremely repetitive, especially the bass, vary it somehow!

3/10 from the genre
1/5 for being halfway decent

try again

I just have 3 words for you. It's not good. Not good at all. It's so boring plain and you need more variation. try again...