Has potential.

Now, to repeat what everyone else has said, it would benefit from more instruments, such as a bass line and a drum line. Heck, at least add drums next time.

just needs

other instruments

(i play a rockin triangle but thats just me.)

its okay

I like remixes with more instruments, though.

That was really good!

If you had some more instruments and a little fine tuning for the instrument used it would be perfect! Nice job!

OMG.

Really good. If you had a whole band on this song, it would sound REALLY GOOD!