Score: 8

".................."

by: PDAF

date: November 4, 2009

Overall a good song, with cool lyrics and all.

But the things that need working on until the finsihed working are;

The singing. First of all, you're not to good of a singer, no offence. But it's nothing that a little practice won't fix, you should be abit more aggressive, but still focus alot on singing good, not loud.

The solo. It just doesn't shine through enough (or at least not on my speakers). If I were you I'd add just a touch of more distortion in the solo, experiment around alittle until you find something you like. Or not, after all it's your song :P

Anyways that's all I can think of right now (got distracted by South Park) so it's a 8/10 and 4/5.

Score: 8

"Cool!!"

by: Satsubatsu

date: October 31, 2009

I find that the lyrics and the music are nice (especially the lyrics ^^), and the voice is good!
Continue, please!!!

Score: 7

"It's a definite start"

by: GiantDouche

date: August 27, 2009

Pros: Instrumentals (incredible), Overall vocal style (reminds me of a female Kurt Cobain, if that makes any sense), Song structure (very well layered)

Cons: Lyrics (this is the only part of the song I actually dislike, the lyrics are rather bland with no symbolism or deep meaning; if grunge is your influence then you can look at some lyrics for Skinny Puppy and Nirvana and see how powerful and intense the lyrics are; you don't have to be a great writer to write good lyrics, just takes inspiration), Yelling vocals (the vocals are great up until the parts where you yell; while they're not awful or even bad they could definitely use some work, you kind of talk yell like people do when listening to music and they decide to sing along)

Overall song was really good. I hope to see more from you in the future because you definitely have some talent here.

Score: 10

"OMFG!!"

by: TeenSpirit

date: July 25, 2009

I love ur lyrics. Simple but brillant, well i guess thats what grunge is about. Definately Nirana like. Makes me think if nirvana did have kurt cobain singing but u this is what it would turn out.

Score: 8

"it was good i liked it"

by: ninjamonkey5000

date: July 11, 2009

this reminds me of frances farmer will have her revenge on seattle by nirvana
not to say its a rip off or anything though
but i liked it its good 90's grunge keep it up