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Homophobe (rough Demo)

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"2007... Wow, so different. Different time."

*EDIT 2023*

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SOng I wrote for another girl

Started out as a love song

THen she broke mah heart!!!!

It then turned into a bitter song


Lyrics......


It's Ok

Im feelin real strange

Brains gone blurted and deranged

(people can't ya listen to me whinge)

Can't ask god

Can ask satan

Gotta get rid of this love and hatred

(people's can't ya see.....)


You hate homo's

You hate gays's

Well you'll hate me when I say

Your a Homophobe

Ears are bleeding

Truth is singing

Well you'll hate me when I say

Your a Homophobe.......Yeah?


Where do I begin?

My whole life's a big sin

All because I can't win

(God ya like to listen to me whinge)

You're royal disiples

You're royal followers

Are now low down sin dwollerwers

(People can't ya see...)


You hate homo's

You hate gays's

Well you'll hate me when I say

Your a Homophobe

Ears are bleeding

Truth is singing

Well you'll hate me when I say

Your a Homophobe.......Yeah?


*guitar solo*


Hate me

God you hate me...? X god knows how much


You hate homo's

You hate gays's

Well you'll hate me when I say

Your a Homophobe

Ears are bleeding

Truth is singing

Well you'll hate me when I say

Your a Homophobe

Homophobe

Homophobe

Homophobe

Your a Homophobe............

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This is the rough copy peoples, thought I'd let ya know that a better version will come out one day.

If I get off my butt and do it :P

Peace and enjoy


-Cherry

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hi, can i use this song for a video of speedpaint? it such a good song i love it, also i thinking for use it for my intro in the videos,can i?

Sour-Cherry responds:

If I record a better version maybe.

Only recently have I rejoined the land of the PC world. Like over 10 Years later ha

......

You have a really unique voice, i like it!
it's pretty good seeing as it's a demo, keep working on it.

..................

Overall a good song, with cool lyrics and all.

But the things that need working on until the finsihed working are;

The singing. First of all, you're not to good of a singer, no offence. But it's nothing that a little practice won't fix, you should be abit more aggressive, but still focus alot on singing good, not loud.

The solo. It just doesn't shine through enough (or at least not on my speakers). If I were you I'd add just a touch of more distortion in the solo, experiment around alittle until you find something you like. Or not, after all it's your song :P

Anyways that's all I can think of right now (got distracted by South Park) so it's a 8/10 and 4/5.

Cool!!

I find that the lyrics and the music are nice (especially the lyrics ^^), and the voice is good!
Continue, please!!!

It's a definite start

Pros: Instrumentals (incredible), Overall vocal style (reminds me of a female Kurt Cobain, if that makes any sense), Song structure (very well layered)

Cons: Lyrics (this is the only part of the song I actually dislike, the lyrics are rather bland with no symbolism or deep meaning; if grunge is your influence then you can look at some lyrics for Skinny Puppy and Nirvana and see how powerful and intense the lyrics are; you don't have to be a great writer to write good lyrics, just takes inspiration), Yelling vocals (the vocals are great up until the parts where you yell; while they're not awful or even bad they could definitely use some work, you kind of talk yell like people do when listening to music and they decide to sing along)

Overall song was really good. I hope to see more from you in the future because you definitely have some talent here.

Sour-Cherry responds:

Thanks for the review

Peace Sour

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Score
4.43 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 16, 2007
12:05 AM EST
Genre
Grunge
File Info
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5 MB
3 min 37 sec

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