Score: 9
"Sounds good."
date: December 24, 2007
Sounds good Evan, but I have a few tips for you.
It sounds great until around :20 when you try to get fancy, the samples you're using don't mix well with the piano (?) part you're using and it brings the quality down a little. Back at :43 it goes back into that nice simple melody, that sounds great, definitely keep that as it is if you ever decide to go back and remix this again. At 1:03 you get fancy again, but this time it sounds nice, the drum sample is smooth and fits right in, the only problem I have with that part is that the bass or distorted piece you use isn't cut for this song, it's a little too much.
1:26, you get that fancy feeling again, revert back to my :20 comment, it doesn't fit well. 1:47 sounds nice with that transition. Up until 2:53 it's very repetitive, nothing new is happening between 1:47 and 2:53. At 2:53 those chord changes are very nice and they fit in very well, I like that part most out of the entire piece. Around 3:13 you get fancy yet again, except this time the melody sounds nice and it fits fine, the only problem I have is that bass/distortion you have going on there again. After that point it's basically just repeated stuff and nothing new, a lot of the song is repeated over and over again, I see you did that just for transition purposes and to add length, no problem with that though. Good job overall.
It took me fucking forever to write this, so you better respond to this.