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well this song is more something that I create with my emotion and thats what it looks like (not too good but I am proud of it anyway.)

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Score: 8

"pretty cool"

by: Nick-Black

date: December 14, 2007

as p4c has said it is a bit cliched, but definatly alot better than alot of stuff I've heard in here. only thing I'd like to add to p4c's review is to perhaps work on the ending, it seems a bit ubrupt.

December 15, 2007

Author's Response:

like P4c i understand the point and I appreciate it a lot and thanks for the review.

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Score: 7

"constructive criticism"

by: p4c

date: December 14, 2007

the underlying concept was good [if not cliched] but here are some tips to improve.

the bass drum and cymbal were really weak. also, try using some claps/snares/hi hats in the drum selection, see some of the top-rated trance songs on ng and ull see.

its good that the synth flows into each other, kinda portamentoish. just, make sure things are balanced out

idk. this song was too short to have any real note-composition interestingness going on, but keep in mind variety later on.

overall this is a good attempt for a new guy on the block. gj ;)
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December 15, 2007

Author's Response:

thanks for the tips and i'll check that but trance is not my speciality, its more my video games remixex that are good. anyway I appreciate the help and thanks for the review.

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