kool

I play loads music I cant see anything wrong with the notes, there are no rules in music, its a kool song I like it.

hey man

i totally dissagree with the lastperson that reviewed. because when your trying to get a certain sound there is no such thing as "notes that dont belong". take my music for example (i.e. listen to my headbangers song). it doesnt really fallow a certain mode or scale. i just say fuck the scale. *jams out* oh well man keep it up man. \m/ i like your style. oh yeah if the last person reads this. he should listen to necrophagist. they dont follow scales or modes either. and they still rock the house down better than most straight up metal bands out there

Dude, come on....

Alright dude. I must tell you strictly from a professional criticism stand point. The begining riff (first 15-20 seconds) sounded pretty cool and promising, BUT you either decided to play notes that did correspond with the exist outline riff, OR your guitar was madly out of tune. The riff was great, had a nice feel to it, but due, it hurt my ears. Keep working at it though, and I like most of your other stuff, but next time, tune your guitar. Good job on your effort though. You Rock!