This is a song I wrote for my girlfriend about 2 years ago. I havent recorded anything new lately but when I decide too I will post it
Very nice guitar
Wow this was some nice guitar that was playing infact it is what I really focused on as soon as I hit play so very good and I like the build up you had on this as well as nice track all the way through with a cool vibe to it all
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More guitar with some extra deep sounds
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Nice!
Great guitarplay in this, starts off simple and picks up the pace nicely along the way, good background beat base, nice variation, and a seemless solo towards the ending, keep it going!
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appreciate it man
If you need help writing lyrics
I suggest you listen to softcore or such(Unless you already do :) )
I think that would help and find words that describe how you feel that would help alot :)
Andywho great song I love it!
Pretty
I love these love ballads. It would be perfect if you had lyrics though... I wrote a song about my girlfriend and the lyrics were so cheesy... Just write how you feel about her, and it should come out really good!
heres the thing though. this song is two years old now and I dont feel that way about her anymore lol. we broke up like a year ago but I still like the song I wrote so thats y I submitted it. thanks for reviewing
w00t
this song is great but if i were you i would be thinking about lyrics for this piece
its be nice but for one I cant write meaningful lyrics to song without fucking it up lol and I cant find ne one who can sing good cause i definately cant haha.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Mushroomhead18nc 
