may wanna work on this more.

You have a good concept here just need to fine tune it some more. There are alot of things here that i can tell you that could be fixed up but i think you know already from the last few posts so i'm not going to just repeat these things =) Either way your concept is great and i think you can make this song really shine if you work on it more. Good jorb on that much! Keep on it! Don't get discouraged!

Ok, heres a few tip.

One, turn down the very begginning drum down just a tad bit. It was a very original track, and you choose the perfect title for this song. But, the main thing you need to do is add different types of synths and not just that one. You also did a good job in looping the track I noticed. Good job al in all.

Excitement!

I'm not going to fault you for the begining, only because I know exactly how diffcult and annoying those are. The choice of instruments worked out well, but the whole thing nees more energy. Put more instruments into the beat - blood overdrive that thing. Heck, blood overdrive the whole thing! Change the melody up every 3rd run through or so. You are on the right track, just don't be afraid to throw things in there.