To be honest, I don't think the song is finished. I'm unhappy with the ending, and a few guitars. A lot of everything after 0:53 might change.

You're right about the drums, and in a WIP version, I have increased their volume and intensity.

I can't seem to figure out how to create a stronger/thicker bass. I've already tried several techniques, but they always make the song overpowering on the monitor. I'm trying NOT to do this, without lowering the volume of any of the lead guitars, which is where I'm stuck. =/

I agree that the song could use more variation. I have this problem in every song I make, as I never want to leave a successful tune. I'm working on it. :P

Probably an inside joke for anyone else reading this.

To my brother here, the song sounds like people are mining in a rhythmic pattern. :P

It's usually the intro, or some section in the middle that are the best parts. I'm terrible at ending songs, because they're almost always temporary, so they're usually half-assed (excuse my language).

The ending section of the song is going to have a lot of work done to it. It sounds ok, but it loses something that is key in the rest of the song.

Thanks for the review!!
~Darthfett

I didn't think too many people in the industrial category would consider light industrial, bordering on rock, industrial, so I put it in the General Rock. That way it can be interpreted, until I get to work on this and put it in its genre, whichever it may turn out to be.

The bass is getting to be a pain to work with. I've tried everything, but I can't get the heavy sound I want, without lowering it on the monitor.

I couldn't decide what to put this in. It's not really finished, but it's a full length song with an ending. For now it goes in the General rock, since it's mostly lighter rock. After I expand more, I may make it more industrial, so that may change. ;)