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this is a slightly extended version of club beats- and yeah i know the endings crap =]
and yes, this is my second ever attempt and is based on club rhythm. thanks for all your review-s there really helpful

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Score: 2

"Sorry, I don't think this is very good."

by: kevs91

date: December 15, 2007

So I sorta fell for your advertisement, the "what does this class as" thread, because I like hearing things that are pretty genre-less and unique. This wasn't either.

I have a number of problems with this track:
First: There's no real cohesion of ideas, at all. You go from one awkward transition to another throughout the entire track.
Second: All the sounds you used were generic, yet still somehow managed to sound out of place with each other. This might be due to the lack of good transitions, or might be due to a lack of tweaking to make your own sounds.
Third: The ending was pretty terrible, but you know that already.
Fourth: The beat is either horribly convoluted or mindlessly generic at intervals. That kinda undoes the entire aim of your track in the first place.

Anyways, I hate to leave a completely negative review, so I'll compliment you on your "marketing". It got me to listen to something I wouldn't have otherwise. Anyways, sorry for not really answering your original question and for leaving a negative review. Hopefully you can either ignore this and not care, or take some criticisms to heart and improve.

Good luck.