Score: 10
"Nice"
date: July 1, 2008
I can definitely see potential in this, i rated 10 because this is only a demo, which means you already know it can be better.
(I mention instruments/sounds in order of appearance)
The only weakness that i can find in this would be the opening. It just doesn't seem to fit well.
Maybe fade in the drums, as they start a little too soon (just my opinion), also the third instrument is a little too sharp. other than that, great melody, kind of sets the mind wandering (again thats the problem with the drums, they break the trance this puts you in)
July 1, 2008
Author's Response:
I agree 100% with drums.. I really kept them there because i can't put together a good drum beat or set for off hand for this song for some reason. LOL i'll end up putting something to it when i get some more muse for this song! =) thanks for the review.