Score: 6
"Good concept, needs polishing"
date: November 6, 2007
The melodies are interesting, but there are a lot of points that feel empty. Also, I think it would be better if you had faster transitions. It's important to keep your audience interested.
Here's a tip: try listening to that song 50 times straight. If you got bored, then something has to be fixed.
Hope this helps. ^_^
November 8, 2007
Author's Response:
i don't get bored with music, except country music and rap, they suck