CERTAINLY not my best, but I submited it anyways
I Liked It
I feel like it could be fleshed out more. More instruments. I feel like the previous post may have been a little harsh. I enjoyed the break and some of those lagging breaks that didn't quite seem to belong actually grew on me as a sort of style rather than a mistake. A more agressive drum beat during the, shall we say industrial, part of the track might be cool. It never hurts to add things you wouldn't expect to work. You end up with interesting results.
Na, I'd have to diagree with you. I'm still working with this piece (hence the title) so the title does kind of fit. I just got anexious on putting it on, why i have not the slightest... But I have done some more work to it and once done i plan to repost, hopefully with a title.
ummm, mixed feelings
i REALLY liked the spacy and smooth stuff in this mixed with the light bloops and bleep sounds. but MAN, when those fucking brash and dirty riff started i turned down my speakers and was like...agggh. not very ear-friendly. but then it when back to the stuff i like, the sweepy, sweet and catchy stuff. stick with that man and you'll be much better sounding. maybe add a dance beat and resubmit it minus the brash stuff. it'd be great!
HAHA yesssss, i noticed the very same not much rythm. But i sorta revised it but that brash stuff is still in there but the rythm is still a little betetr. Anywho it still is not NEARLY my best work. But i see how you think the middle doesnt connect. I will try to touch it up. Thanks for the pointers guy.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
duksey424 
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