Nice

And here was a nice song you have going it gets started really good right out of the gate, you should think about having some gaps in the song and allowing it to have some build up, besides that this was notbad at all, good guitar sessions in this one you can really hear the quality of the guitar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slow down and some build up could be great with this one.

~X~

Your song is so good, it makes Metallica sound like sixteen year old amachers.
:D

nice...

i love the ending solo cuz personally it's more beautiful than the second.
by the way,is this version of the song in a higher tuning?

holy shit man

man i love the beginning the beat just makes me want to get up and run with the beat
but ya this is good love the guitar in it too

awesome

this is the most awesome heavy metal ive in my life time totally awesome jam