Score: 8
"Great improvement."
date: January 17, 2009
Your vocals have improved a lot since when I first started listening to your music.
I compared this to one of your older songs and there's a large difference, of course, a good difference.
The instrumental part has an easy-to-grasp rhythm to it, that just makes it feel easy going and not something that a listener would find hard to enjoy.
The only thing I noticed that might (or might not) need to change, is that in a lot of your songs the introduction before the vocals are really long and might make the song more enjoyable if shortened.
An example of this might be "No-Face", where it takes up to 0:22 to begin the vocalization, but the lyrics don't kick in until 0:36.
Though, that's not entirely a bad thing. As the build-up effect worked well in songs like "The Fade" and "Twilight".
January 17, 2009
Author's Response:
Yeah, I've noticed that I have long intros. I actually was recently thinking about that when I started planning how my next album's going to go.
Thank you for your input though. Advice is never a bad thing.
