Listening...

Ok, that synth that comes in the beginning is cool. The one with the pitchbend or rez. The drum rhythm keeps progressing, its hard to tell where the parts are added on... Creepy.

That bass doesn't fit. Try using something else. The synth that came in at 1:00 was really loud. Try to turn it down a bit. Its all dominating the drums. I like the saw bass that comes in later. The drums need to be louder.

The melodic work is ok, not great. It made a somewhat good atmosphere, but nothing amazing. The harmonies weren't really there, I wasn't feeling them.

Overall, this is an ok song. It doesn't really go anywhere though, so I need to take off for that. ok, 7/10. I wouldn't mind it if you checked out my newest song, Overload.