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Uploaded
Oct 28, 2007 | 10:13 AM EDT
File Info
Song
2.3 MB
2 min 29 sec
Score
3.75 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.75 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
1,220 Plays | 103 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Dance
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Author Comments

Well, this is the complete version, but as I liked it a lot, I can still change it...

Reviews


animefireballanimefireball

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Turned out Nicely

But some how, the leads you used seem not to fit right...


ErikPaladin responds:

Thanks, I guess.


TheTriangleTheTriangle

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice melody

i really liked the melody. not much to improve on. it was repetitive but sort of in a good way. many different synths


ErikPaladin responds:

Yay!!!


wyldfyre1wyldfyre1

Rated 4 / 5 stars

a song that makes me wanna party it up!

Well put together my friend! Oh, and thanks for the review on the voice loop LOL.


ErikPaladin responds:

\o/ Thanks \o/


RigRig

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Kinda thin

First of all, thanks for your reviews! :D
On to your stuff, now...

I like the bass sound, but it just was too repetitive. Try changing the chord progression up every so often, it keeps people on their toes.
You know what you need? Some swooshing background pads. The whole song is kinda thin, and the one pad I DO hear just doesn't cut it.
Your drums are too straight and predictable. Throw in some crazy drum loops, slice them up, and rearrange them! :D Also, there's a synth that pops in a couple times that's WAY too loud in the mix. Turn it down plz D:

It has potential, it's just those little things all adding up that bring it down. Keep working at it, read what other people are doing, and I recommend picking up a copy of Comupter Music magazine. It's chock full of advice, free synths/effects, and free samples! I learned a lot from it. :)

- Rig


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ErikPaladin responds:

I reviewed your stuff because I liked it, and not because I wanted you to review my stuff. Thanks a lot for doin' that without asking!!

Well, that's my first submission. I know it's not good enough, but my main problem is ideas. I come with the main part. Ok, I create it. But then I think: "Ok. What now?".

I'll follow your advices for sure. In vacations, when I'll have free time, I'll come with something better.

Thanks again, dude!


nal1200nal1200

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Replying

You only had one song :-( I was expecting to make a couple of reply reviews.

Anyway, this is a pretty good start, keep it up.


ErikPaladin responds:

Well, the problem is that I don't have enough time to complete my musics... I have 6 other songs waiting to be completed, but that can take long...