Hmm, some interesting stuff here
Well I see some talent here I'll admit, you obviously spent alot of time on this song. In my honest opinion though, this isn't really good music. I think you should concentrate this talent of yours into music that's a bit more.. well, musical. Lol. But still, I don't want you to take that to mean that this isn't good. This just seems like a compilation of everything you can do. Put this into something with some long lasting tune and I reckon you'd get a good tune out of it.
Androu1 
