Notbad at all

So this was kind of diferent I like the instraments in there I could be wrong but I think theres some piano and maybe even guitar strings it sounds unique and different though and it brings on a new style of sound and is unique you could make it longer and mix up the tempos aswell, anyways great stuff.

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you could make it longer and mix up the tempos aswell

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Very good start. I won't give you 4 stars because it's just a start, but trust me, it does give very good feelings and thoughts. Continue it :D